peer review

After reading over a few of blog posts, I have chosen to peer review Eleanor Renwick’s Blog 2. I like how she clearly states and summarises the 3 main topics and outlines what she aims to do in her blog post. She then proceeds to give a clear definition of her first case study (Diversity) and raises the qualms that people have with this specific topic. In her third paragraph she uses Rihanna’s Fenty Beauty as an example of a company that is promoting diversity and catering to the make-up needs of the under-represented communities within media and society. Eleanor’s fourth paragraph detailing her role as a creative is concise and she is acknowledging her social responsibility however she doesn’t give example of how she could, or has done this in the past. She then addresses and gives examples of how she can be more sustainable in her own practise. She then references an article from Depop and Farfetch then outlines the general argument of the article which I thought showed genuine interest and further research in the topics at hand. Then in her conclusion she summarises her responsibilities and how she is going to bring these new topics with her in the future. Overall, two of the topics discussed had a very good real world examples and explanations with them and her paragraph about Social Responsibility was the only one lacking them. It comes across that she has learnt about the topics throughout Better Lives.